One day the wind blew again,
and re-opened your scribbled words.
It gave me same old sensation,
And cleared what was blurred.
You started it with dear,
Yes you are also my special one.
Then the wing whispered something,
I turned back but there was none.
Papers have turned pale,
And even I have turned old.
My beauty has vanished somewhere,
And these years has made me cold.
My shaking hands have turned weak,
Finding difficult to grip the letter.
Your every word seems so soothing,
No one could wrote it better.
My body is degrading day-by-day,
But our love has turned strong.
Wrinkled eyes tried to control,
But tears kept rolling all night long.
-Β©SNEHA PRAKASH
I READ IT AGAIN AND I GOT THE SAME FEELINGS AS I HAD EARLIER LOVELY LINES EXPLAINED BEAUTIFULLY.
DID YOU CARE TO READ MY POEMS /BLOGS . VERY NICE. I KNOW YOU WILL LIKE THEM
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Thank you sir. This made my dayπ I am little caught up these days. But, will surely check your blog now.
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ALWAYS WELCOME
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Magnificent creativity to show the real felling in words , well π
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Thanks a lot π
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Effortlessly beautiful poetryβ€οΈ How do you do it?
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Thanks a lot for your kind words. Matters a lotπ
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Beautiful words. :))
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Thank you sir π
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My pleasure. God bless you.
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Beautiful words β€π€
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Amazing. I really loved it. Way you express your thoughts is great.
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Thank you Prafulπ
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You are an amazing writer. I am in love with your verse β€
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Thanks a lotπ
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You are welcome dear π
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your poem about old age is splendid one. It is done beautifully.The last lines My body is——–the tears rolling all night is simply superb.
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Thanks a lot sir π Yes, I read your blog. Your all posts are amazing π
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Ameen ; your greatness for this comment
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